Sunday, August 28, 2016

Transferable skills from speech writing and performing to writing novels and stories and articles


I commend - connections betweens speaking and writing: Clear title. Structure. Ending mirrors start or answers (in summary) question posed at the start. I recommend - avoiding triple adjectives. In speeches we use triple commending adjectives such as - He is an eloquent, engaging, enticing speaker. I just had my new novel The Tailor and The Spy proof-read and the proof-reader said: 'Too many adjectives. Contrived and slows the action. It weighs down every sentence, interrupts the flow, totally wrong.' I thought, oh dear - I've picked up that habit from Toastmasters. Commend, both speeches and short stories and novels can end hinting at a sequel you must read or see. Angela Lansbury, writer, photographer, speaker. Author of twenty books including: Quick Quotations (for speakers and writers) Who Said What When The Tailor and The Spy

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Monday, March 30, 2015

Harrovian Speakers on singing, quotations and more

Thanks to VPE Ruth who gave me a lift, I arrived early at Harrovians Speakers' Club in Stanmore. We were to enjoy a speech on singing, my speech on quotations - an evening of fun lay ahead. First we were busy with practical matters, setting out the chairs, and I insisted on moving the timer's table with lights to one side of the aisle so that the aisle was not blocked and in an emergency everybody had a quick, clear run to the fire exit. Safety first.

Heroes of the evening included Gosbert Chagula, a former President, presented with Heroes chocolates by Ruth Vishnik, another former president.

President Indra Sikdar, ATMS, AL,  opened the meeting with the Toastmasters' International mission statement. He told a story about soldiers painting masks to help cope with internal traumas.

Toastmaster of the evening was Gosbert Chagula, who began, most originally, quoting a radio announcer, 'Welcome to another edition of Harrovians!'
Gosbert welcomed returning member Matthew who, I recall, once gave us a speech on throwing Frisbees, and guest Aslam from Northwood.

 Guest Aslam, an enthusiast who joined at his first Harrovians Speakers' Club meeting, like I did the first time I attended. President Indra Sikdar was able to offer the choice of pay tomorrow on line or now by cheque or cash, whichever is easier and quicker for you.

Grammarian Karim Tharani had prepared by researching very thoroughly and spoke authoritatively. he told us that his name is Arabic for generous, and generously shared his knowledge with us. His word of the day was Augur, from Greeks who interpreted the flights of birds in order to predict. Karim reminded us that Hamlet, in the Shakespeare play of that name, defies the auguries (plural of augury). Karim recommended the Oxford Dictionary of English Grammar. He advised that he would be looking out for alliteration, triads and accurate spelling in any visual aids.

Ampura was our timer.

Hari who was supposed to be table topics master was unable to attend, but had emailed his topics to VPE Ruth who took over.

The first question for the impromptu speeches was:
1 Tell us about a brave or heroic new activity you've tried. 

Dear Reader, I suggest you think about how you would answer this topic and the others.

Indra Sikdar described how he belonged to Spice which organises outdoor activities and restaurant visits. The group took him to Luton for indoor surfing. Indra demonstrated surfing horizontally, balancing.

The other new activity he tried was a mock parachute jump. A fan created the rich of air you would feel when jumping - handy to prepare you if you are planning on the real thing. He finished, 'Been there - done that.'

2 Your serene holiday turned into an adventure. Tell us about it.

Veeren - went to an overseas wedding and enjoyed witnessing a beach wedding at a hotel with all inclusive unlimited food and tried the Caipirinha cocktail, the Brazilian national drink. After three days on the beach he took tours to see a Mayan temple, the Tuloom caves, an astrological hole, and swimming underwater in sunlight.

3 If you had a dream job, what would it be?

Lorna,

What (crazy thing) did you do to attract the attention of your first crush?

myself (Angela) on my first crush and what I did.

Which one item would you buy if you won the lottery?

Jay said she would have a car, for independence, so she would not have to wait for a bus.

In a crisis, what would you do?


Jayanthiny Kangatharai gave a speech about the small number of minority ethnic and racial groups in academia and as professors. The lack of women also. So there were few role models. She quoted statistics.

Sanjay started his speech The Joy of Singing by singing. He ended by quoting Ella Fitzgerald: The only thing better than singing is - more singing!

I (Angela Lansbury) gave a speech on quotations entitled: All's Well That End's Well.
I began by asking who could not say who originated that phrase?  To my surprise, I saw a sea of hands.

So I asked who knew? Only two people. English teacher Lorna, and Indra Sikdar, were confident that is was William Shakespeare (Shakespeare's play is given the title All's Well That Ends Well).


Angela Lansbury with book Quick Quotations for successful speeches. Angela Lansbury is another former President of Harrovians.

Evaluations

VPE Ruth Vishnik presented Gosbert, immediate past president who is leaving to live elsewhere, with a blue and white shirt as well as the chocolates called Heroes.
Sanjay the singer won the ribbon for best speech. He had used a quotation, too.

Glossary
ATMS
AL

See previous post for glossary.

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Saturday, January 31, 2015

Harrovians January and February News: Speeches, Harrow Mayor and Contests 2015

This newsletter covers the speeches at Meetings on Jan 5 and 19 and the forthcoming contests Feb 2nd attended by Harrow's mayor.


Jan 5 What an Evening!



Jan 19 What an Evening!

Speech by President Indra Sikdar, titled, Do you think immigration to the UK is a good or bad thing?

Seema Menon on Climatic Change and Greener Planet
Seema ended with a positive message, Let's protect our earth.

Thulasi Arunthavanathan

Lorna Burns on conversing with ease.
One of her useful tips was use open-ended questions.

Karen Carter offered me a useful insight on positive thinking and being warm and encouraging and not alienating people. Social workers are told never to use the word bad.
































President Indra Sikdar presents ribbons to award winning speakers and evaluators.

Committee Meeting
Held at the home of President Indra Sikdar.
Ruth Vishnick produced biscuits in a doggie biscuit tin. All members are invited to the next committee meeting(s). Please come along to see what the committee does and you might be inspired to assist and shadow a committee member. This will help you to be confident about standing for a committee role and helping the club prosper this year or next. Committee meetings are held at a member's home and the food and drink is on a pot luck basis so if you have special diets just bring what you would like to eat and share and show.

Ruth Vishnick is a former president of Harrovians. She has given speeches on running a tea shop, making scones, and the pleasures of having a dog.


Club Officer Training
Harrovians members who attended:

Indra Sikdar
Angela Lansbury
Seema Menon
Warren Sheng


 Seema with slides at Club Officer Training

Warren Sheng at Club Officers Training at the site of sister club HOD which meets on the first and third Thursdays each month. More pictures of this event on Facebook.

International Contest - what an evening!
Takes place Monday Feb 2nd attended by the Mayor of Harrow.
You will hear planned speeches by several experienced speakers - they need to have completed at least six speeches from the manual. Then for the second contest a target speaker delivers a speech and each of the evaluators has to analyse the speech giving the good aspects and suggesting improvements.

The Mayor of Harrow
VIP, guest of honour, will be this year's mayor of Harrow. The Mayor for the municipal year 2014/15 is The Worshipful The Mayor, Councillor Ajay Maru.
For more details about the mayor see the council website.
http://www.harrow.gov.uk/info/200033/elections_and_representatives/21/the_mayor_of_harrow

So you can feel at ease meeting our illustrious mayor, here is his photo. He is wearing his badge of office - and a red coat!


Angela Lansbury is a past president or HARROVIANS and with the help of Indra Sikdar has compiled the first copy of the History of Harrovians speakers club, illustrated with photos of founder members Indra, Imke, Kayode, the Harrow & Wealdstone pub with the supposed Weald Stone marking the boundary of Harrow Wealdstone, and the heritage plaque, and many more previous well known members, such as Alan McMahon, now Toastmasters Area Governor and highlights of events - such as being locked out of venues, performing speeches on street corners and parks. Price of paperback £10. It can also be downloaded.

Angela Lansbury BA Hons, CC ACG, is the author of twenty books including two paperbacks which may interest you: Quick Quotations for speakers and writers; Who Said What When? quotations for every day of the year, Jan 1 to Dec 31.

Post being updated with more text and photos. Come back later.

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