I commend - connections betweens speaking and writing: Clear title. Structure. Ending mirrors start or answers (in summary) question posed at the start.
I recommend - avoiding triple adjectives. In speeches we use triple commending adjectives such as - He is an eloquent, engaging, enticing speaker. I just had my new novel The Tailor and The Spy proof-read and the proof-reader said: 'Too many adjectives. Contrived and slows the action. It weighs down every sentence, interrupts the flow, totally wrong.' I thought, oh dear - I've picked up that habit from Toastmasters.
Commend, both speeches and short stories and novels can end hinting at a sequel you must read or see.
Angela Lansbury, writer, photographer, speaker.
Author of twenty books including:
Quick Quotations (for speakers and writers)
Who Said What When
The Tailor and The Spy
Labels: adjectives, end, Quick Quotations, recommend, speech writing, start, The Tailor and The Spy, transferable skill
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